Dont ever upload your image as it would
Shatter the image I have formed of you
You wit...
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Dont ever upload your image as it would
Shatter the image I have formed of you
You with your curly hair and dimple cheeks
Slim waist and dancing hips
Have I not met you in your words
Have you not shared with me your being
Did I not walk with you on your travails
Did i not weep when suzanne , your alter ego was hurt
Words could never touch me
Was what I had imagined
You proved me so utterly wrong
You made a better man out of me
I wanted to meet you and share with you about me
So that you know as much about me as I of you
You have revealed yourself so much through your words
That now I feel that I have known you for ages
You should know that you were a part of my growth
Otherwise it is like using you
But when I meet you I may end up embaressing you
As I will transcend just being your fan
Let me live forever with your image
I do not want to see you or hear from you
My Iove for you transcends body, emotions and spirit
I love you so do not upload your photo
(Dedicated to one of my favorite authors)
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dear mallipooh,
i was not well for some time and i have missed out on a few comments.. sorry that i missed your comment...
thanks for appreciating
Sampath
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That was a lovely poem. Love that speaks of the mind and not of the skin.Something that's rare in these times..
Please do visit my first blog "The wine" .I would really appreciate your valuable comment on the same as you have always encouraged me to write and I've finally gathered some thoughts to put down
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dear ajit nambiar,
thanks for your viist and your comments.. how can i reveal my secrets to you...
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thanks shamrose,
you speak directly from your heart.. please do raed my other blogs also .. you may enjoy them.. thanks for the vote....
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hi. it is a beautiful poem, which does not express only the feelings.. but inner beauty of your heart. i don't know how i can praise.. congrates, thanks. as i am alone in jungle of amarica. i wonder any dum did not tell me about this web page. even my so called friends, family.. i am so much thankful to my sweet sulekha..i am in love with it. i wish i have lot time to participate. i don/t watch tv, but do read you guys...
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good one ,
hey who is that fav author,
you have created images!
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dear mythili,
Thanks for your comments...
i do rememeber thIllan Mohananmbla with gopulus drawings i think..
and the aura it had .. true . these were not there in the picture....
thabnks for your recommendations also.
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Mr Sampath,
I enjoyed reading this poem.My thoughts on reading this poem were different.For no reason I immediately thought of the Thillana Mohanambal that Subbudu wrote which an all time classic and which I loved reading again and again.But when I saw the movie version inspite of the great acting by both Sivaji and Padmini I was greatly disappointeed .As you have said in your poem,my picturisation of Mohanambal in my mind was so totally different.Subbudu had created unforgettable characters.
Regards
Mythili
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thanks for your vist
and also recommenation..
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dear tunnelvison,
i am sorry..
i missed your comment..
thanks for your visit and comments....
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